Does this hurt your head as much as it hurts mine?
[The organization conducting research] said that, as a plan’s total assets under management increase, the more likely the sponsor was to identify [removed to preserve anonymity] as elements of its investment program.
What?
As they INCREASE (present tense), the sponsor WAS (past tense)?
AS they increase, the MORE LIKELY?
Somebody collected a paycheck – a paycheck with money in it – for writing that.
Shaking my head.
What do you think?